Vampire Invasion’s Maalox Moment

As I progress through “Vampire Invasion”, book three of the Vampire Syndrome Saga, I recall the days of 2012, when I was pitching Vampire Syndrome to New York publishers.

One of my rejection letters said V.S. wasn’t “innovative” enough. A vampire with Down Syndrome battling his own kind, and aliens, wasn’t innovative enough? 😉

Now that I’ve checked out what this same company released for paranormal titles in 2013 and 2014, I can see the opposite is true. Vampire Syndrome was too innovative. This company subsides on paranormal comfort food, light reading to fill the mass market racks at general retailers. Vampire Syndrome would have been a diamond in their coal mine… which doesn’t work so well when the company runs on coal.

When I was writing Chapter Six of “Vampire Invasion”, I had a moment of realization. After the leader of the alien Pure Vampires makes a dramatic disclosure of a huge secret kept quiet for decades, I flash back to 1951, in another character’s POV. This is a moment that might have caused a New York editor to reach for their antacids. 😈

When I told our editors about this, my chief editor replied “You don’t have to worry about it.” I truly appreciate my publisher’s willingness to support innovation, down to the ‘minor’ details. Thank you, PDMI Publishing!

And here’s a sneak preview for you. Remember, this is what comes right after the leader of the alien Pure Vampires has made his big dramatic reveal. And yes, the end of the flashback will tie in perfectly… 😉


Dear Diary, Sunday, June 24, 1951

Another day in the doldrums. Difficult to fathom that I could succumb to such boredom, being who I am. The first woman to serve as President of the Council of Thirteen, yet I feel like my own secretary. Listless. Perhaps I have performed my duties too well, for our community has been orderly as the Normals’ new swaths of suburbia. I peer out the window at my new Cadillac convertible. Detroit’s finest shining manifest of overhead-valve Hydramatic glory, yet with none of the handmade soul of my 1930 Cadillac Sixteen roadster. Even the Normals realize what they’ve lost, redefining those cars of true elegance crafted in the pre-war glory times to be “classics.” Automobiles destined for car shows and museums instead of the highways, the latest generation of Normals destined to be forever blind to the heights of hand-craftsmanship that ruled the roads but a score ago. I would take my Sixteen out on this lovely day and display its full mechanical finery, the type of which now eludes the Normals’ routine sights, but alas I would be accosted by throngs of enthusiastic Normals at every filling station. Even the pump attendants never fail to inquire if my Sixteen is for sale, as if they could afford it. But I know full well, at times those of superior structure will have to conceal themselves from the humdrum and mundane. Yet the ennui of the everyday Normal routine is ever reaching out its hand of blandness to me, as if the tedium of post-war Normal life is ready at every turn to suck even us bloodsuckers into the empty eye of its silent storm.

1930 Cadillac V-16 Roadster


  1. Details of car, please, as Cadillac did not build a boat tail speedster. Was an actual one-off car specially built for this series or was it a die-cast model? Perhaps it is an illusion using computer technology? A photo of this car was posted at Google Plus and inquiring minds would like to know! TIA

    • 1. This particular Cadillac V-16 is a fictional example, owned by a fictional character.
      2. Even by “in-universe” standards, the Vampires and their possessions are generally unknown to the Normal populace.
      3. High-grade luxury cars of this era could be purchased as a bare chassis and fitted with a body custom-built to the owner’s specification. Many of these now CCCA-Classic cars have been re-bodied, especially true for Duesenbergs (where more roadsters now exist than were originally built!), but there are several known re-bodied Cadillac V-16’s.

      “Official Version”: Lilith purchased a short-wheelbase Cadillac V-16 bare chassis, then commissioned a custom body.

      • Thanks for your very quick reply which I’ll post to the G+ conversation. Doreen

        On Aug 12, 2016 9:04 AM, “Vampire Syndrome Blog” wrote:

        > Daven Anderson commented: “1. This particular Cadillac V-16 is a fictional > example, owned by a fictional character. 2. Even by “in-universe” > standards, the Vampires and their possessions are generally unknown to the > Normal populace. 3. High-grade luxury cars of this era could be ” >

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